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PostSubject: Swifly Tendered   Thu May 06, 2010 12:12 pm

This is a peom i wrote in class on my free time. its unfinished because i only had 10 minutes.

I swiftly tender down to the floor, with a silent drop from the sparkles above. The waves move me from the ocean floors and the winds blow me from the clouds above. The feeling howls but I know it’s poor. So I see new gates open that don’t go away.

Can anyone guess what its about? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Swifly Tendered   Thu May 06, 2010 6:54 pm

To me its rather unclear what its about but then again i just got back from a 9 hour day at school X_x, would you mind explaining to me what it is mate?

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PostSubject: Re: Swifly Tendered   Thu May 06, 2010 7:59 pm

Its about a drop of water, pretty random but as i said i only had 10 minutes.
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PostSubject: Re: Swifly Tendered   Thu May 06, 2010 8:01 pm

well if its just about a drop of water thats pretty damn descriptive, you really paint a picture in my head now that I know what its about
You have pretty good talent man
keep it up

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