-Decent effects on the render
-Blend, Its okay but could be much improved.
-To much negative space as said before.
-Text attracts to much attention, to big and bad placing.
-Way to Dark.
-No Light source.
-The size is way to big especially with all that empty space.
I think much more could be done here, but to be honest this signature is pretty boring. It looks like your focusing all your effects on the render. But i know your new to signature making so this is pretty decent for a rookie.
Overall rating: 2.5/10